E-Portfolio Writing Term 1

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

Structure:

L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.

Indicators:

• Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
• Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
• Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures

Indicators:

• Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
• Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

• Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
• Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

Simple sentences - green

Compound sentences - yellow

Complex sentences - light blue

Over the speaker the long neck giraffe was being silly and it was really

rude to the other workers the owl was getting distracted by the long

neck giraffe. When the owl was counting down 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 off we go

into the air now the very hairy bear is starting to make food for the

workers but some of the koalas are making delicious food for the

passengers in 2 hours or less. We are going to give out some drinks

and food if you are thirsty or hungry said the sloth over the speaker.

1 hour later over the speaker the captain owl said we have party time

in half an hour and it can be the best party you ever had 30 minuets later .

We are having best party ever said the workers then the moneys are coming

out and they are going to us into everyone ahhhh!!!! Now the koalas have
finished the food mm yummy that was amazing.Someone said there is
another plane behind us and in front of us they are going to crash into
us. The alarm is going because we are going to go down into the
airport that is not the right one so we can't go were we are
going to. Sorry guys you have to take an normal airlines every
one died from the crash even the workers in the airport but Jake or Leo didn't
died hi Leo are you ok? yes.